Story update

October 23, 2009 at 10:21 pm | Posted in Story | Leave a comment
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Story page has been updated to accommodate the outline I’m writing. No, you can’t see the outline =P

Story update: Ryne n Julia

October 12, 2009 at 10:38 pm | Posted in Characters, Story | Leave a comment
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Updated the story page so that it makes sense with the story outline I’m writing, as well as making the story more interesting.

Which is more interesting?

  • Ryne sees Julia at school, and has bad memories of her. Julia also sees Ryne, and wants to tell him something, but she is inhibited from doing so. They don’t share any classes. Ryne wants nothing to do with her.
  • Ryne sees Julia at school, and has bad memories of her. He  finds out that she’s in several of his classes. He unwillingly gets partnered up with her in a class for the semester. Julia wants to tell him something, but is inhibited from doing so. Although he isn’t fond of her, he doesn’t mind her hanging around him. As a result, she can be considered part of Ryne’s circle of friends.

At first Ryne and Julia didn’t share the same classes. But then it hit me: how is Julia going to repair her broken relationship with him? I can’t really make her stalk Ryne all over the place. By making them classmates and partners, it would help the two bond. And by letting her hang around him, it would help Ryne second guess about his past with her; i.e. it’s the past, let it go. Julia isn’t what she was in the past. After all, who wouldn’t want to have a sweet girl as your girlfriend? ^_~

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